Gud afternoon,
First of all I would like to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to critic your work: Dare: Make this Man Smile :)
Your story have a very interesting plot. Kung baga may uniqueness sa bawat story, may boom factor and may twist which is hinahanap ko lagi sa gawa ng isang author. For me, its much better to add more moral principles na applicable sa mga young generations. Yung principle na pwede nilang gamitin in their life :) I also suggest na make it more unique, paglaruan mo each character and each story to make it superb :) So ayun lang, i hope makatulong ako for the development of your story and once again salamat and more power :)