Eric_Von_Rundstedt
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Welcome to Wattpad, friend! I took interest to your story recently, and it's coming along really well! I've commented on some of the descriptions, and if you need help with more, I'd be glad to be of use! Anyways, see you around!
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@Eric_Von_Rundstedt I like that idea. I was thinking a scene of rest time where Zack is cleaning and inspecting one of his newly 'acquired' weapons making note of how similar they are to other firearms of the era but noting the differences. Elizabeth chipping her two cents in to try to brighten up the mood by getting Zack to talk about world history of her era. Zack maybe mentions the Tour de France as something he's heard Marines talk about on occasion. I can confirm Zack will give a brief history lesson on the Boxer Rebellion and Wounded knee during the fight with Slate. Maybe mention Nanking and the October Revolution. Debating on having him hum a song or two to Sabaton on the many rides to and from places through out the Bioshock Infinite gauntlet. On the civilian side of things, I'm thinking maybe have him touch on the woman's suffrage movement to show Elizabeth how quickly times can change in a short period. Maybe having him compare The Boxer Rebellion to the Tusla Massacre which has fallen to obscurity and rarely known. Debating on that bits or if they would be pushing too many boundaries. More I look into major events from around that general area (I'm giving myself about a 20 year lee way either direction), the more interesting it becomes and the more I realize just how much has happened we never knew about.
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@Eric_Von_Rundstedt It might not be a nessicarily violent area, but one that Elizabeth would take interest in and something more peaceful and civilian-esc for Zach to become more human and/or emotional instead of a constant and consistant militaristic demeanor. Maybe something to bring Zach and Elizabeth closer together?
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Eric_Von_Rundstedt
@Eric_Von_Rundstedt Well, if in the story they are going to Paris as you said, could it be possible to add the 10th Tour de France? Took place between June 30 and July 28 1912. Could be a little conflict the protags get themselves involved with.
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