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AhmadAlmulla
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Writer-nim can you disclose with me why write a horror story from pokemon? When I read the intro I felt this would be a nice story, but no you ****ing made so gore that I don't know do I love this story or not. Please put a note so children below 12 do not read it. Thank you dh1995 for your lovely story my vote is for you.
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dh1995
@AhmadAlmulla thank you for telling me so. It wasn't my first intention to make the story so gore so I did not put a note in the intro. And later when I decided to write so, I only remembered to put a warning on the chapters. I'll fix it right away. And about why I decided to do so, I don't just randomly add a horror part in the story. The reasons are listed below. Note that there are big spoilers, so it depends on you to read or not. Firstly, it's because of the location. Lyon spawned right in the outskirts of Forest of the Beginnings. This is an outlaw zone. All sorts of criminal organizations are out there. So it's illogical if Lyon could leisurely waltz in and out, right? Secondly, it's because of Lyon's and Joltérax's personalities. Instead of getting scared like all the other child should, Lyon calmly fought back which just piqued Joltérax's interest in the worst way. And Joltérax, a psychopath, wouldn't let Lyon die so easily. Lastly, it's because of the main plot. Although Joltérax's dead, there are some stuff and characters related to him in the latter part of the story. I need Joltérax to be that crazy to make such an impact so later when I mentioned him, you won't go like "who the f#ck is Joltérax?" And the trauma from Joltérax also needs to have the ability to change Lyon's personality and later make him decide differently throughout the story. Noted that Lyon is not simply a hero or villain. He does both good things and bad things. Aside from Joltérax's and another part in Arc I and the battles against criminal organizations, the rest of the story is normal. The journey is long and I want to write a lot of stuff so it definitely won't become a horror story. Oh, and thank you very much for your votes
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