@thebooklover2123 I have to agree. Your story 'A day with Tom', is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I also agree that it should be Charli's P.O.V. I really hope that you would make a sequel! Having it as Charli's P.O.V would make the readers understand the pain that Charli is going through while dating Tom. You should also add things like them having a fight, disagreements, Tom doing the wrong things and stuff. You should try to link it to real life other than a fantasy couple (No offence though). This would make the story a more realistic one. If you would like to have more idea, please feel free to DM me!
Thanks!