Just got done reading up until your latest parts and I have a few pieces of constructive criticism. Now first off let me say stories like yours aren't normally my cup of tea. Yet yours low key has me hooked. I will be there when a new chapter is released. Now for my gripes and it's not many. The format? The Way the story looks when I read it sometimes can be a bit jaring. That might be because I have my own style of how I present my story but I can tell our styles are similar. Piggybacking off of that and this isn't to bash but it seems like English isn't your first language. And if so I don't have any issues with that but It leaves much to be desired when it comes to dialogue. So my main gripe is grammar. But other than that I do enjoy Kramer and Romans dynamic and can't wait to see what you come up with next.