Hey diet water!! I don’t want to be rude or anything but your story is a little disrespectful and you called his eyes vomit green. I think they are beautiful and you should just stop writing before the Harry fandom comes for you. Peace and love
Well, with peace and love...
I never intended the “vomit green eyes” comment as a negative. I personally like the color of vomit. But telling me to stop writing and publishing my story is a bit rude. I would how ever love for you to explain what other part of my writing is disrespectful in your eyes... I never mean to upset anyone with my writing and truly would love to know what was disrespectful. Again, with peace and love. <3
Hey diet water I was wondering if you could make your chapters longer. If you can’t that’s fine ☺️✌️ keep up the good work, I already love the story!!!