@Sim-AntinI Hello there!It was a very nice surprise hearing from you! Well I do enjoy your story, i like the way it doesn't fit exactly the norm (cliche), something difficult i assume. Normally I vote later on but I knew you from your other stories. As long as there aren't loopholes and it goes at a normal pace, not to slow or you get bored or fast that you're wondering what did you miss, I think you are more than fine. As for the story itself it's yours to tell and I am here to read it. I like your writing style so regardless of where I want it to go ,i want the surprise more! In another words you manage to take us from reality and that's all I can ask for! So thank you!
