dinorexcelsior

Toy Story 4: Detective Arthur morrow has officially been completed and will start dropping chapters tomorrow stay tuned. And don’t worry I’m hard at work on other stories too.

dinorexcelsior

@Michelexx13 I can’t always overhaul and entire script to fit a character sometimes it’s just easier to add them in and change a few things around you don’t like there’s the door
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Michelexx13

@dinorexcelsior I can only give you one simple piece of advice: when you make a story and put a character that you created yourself, you can give it more importance in the story. Your stories are very good, but when you put a character you created, I just feel like I'm looking at a written version of a cartoon from a movie, but with an extra dialogue, it doesn't have a recurrence in the story
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flexfighter34

@dinorexcelsior Thanks. It's got a long way to go. Hope you like the names I came up with.
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PaulMorillas

@dinorexcelsior You know what would be more interesting? They're going to need a lot of help.
          
          -Sid's toys
          -Sunnyside's toys
          -Mason's toys, the Battlesaurs if possible
          -Billy Combat Carl and his friends' toys
          -Archer and his toy friends
          
          They'll join the team to stop the technology that's invading them.

flexfighter34

@dinorexcelsior Sometimes you got to know when too much is too much.
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dinorexcelsior

Okay look, I only do what’s in the actual story this is way too much for me to add on my own so, big fat no.
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PaulMorillas

@dinorexcelsior Did you see the Mario Bros and Galaxy movies? I was wondering if you finish writing your remaining stories, could you write a story on your Wattpad? His love interest would be Rosalina, the girl who takes care of the stars and is very beautiful.

dinorexcelsior

No I had not seen it and I would have to write the first movie first 
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146128c

Are you doing season six of miraculous story

flexfighter34

@dinorexcelsior Having the same question asked over and over again can be annoying. The first time I asked I forgot.
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dinorexcelsior

@146128c I apologize for my outburst I’m just tired of people asking this question. 
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146128c

@dinorexcelsior I'm sorry, I didn't know and I'll stop
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flexfighter34

While reading Rocketear, I discovered a comment which I will paste for you.
          KingMuse
          nice update, but I have a major issue with it and the whole story in general. Al's input into the conversation is not natural at all, his words are never acknowledged or even reacted to even if he is right in front of you. this really knocks me out of the story since nothing the character ever says is important due to the fact that other characters act like he isn't even there. hope you fix these changes Steve Urkel: Thought you should know that.

flexfighter34

@dinorexcelsior One word: Stubborn. I should know. Muse must have been utterly ridiculous.
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dinorexcelsior

@flexfighter34 i told him but he kept hounding me so i blocked him
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flexfighter34

@flexfighter34 Well, that's King Muse's words not mine. I get it. Just wasn't sure you were aware of it. You told King about it I assume?
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dinorexcelsior

Toy Story 4: Detective Arthur morrow has officially been completed and will start dropping chapters tomorrow stay tuned. And don’t worry I’m hard at work on other stories too.

dinorexcelsior

@Michelexx13 I can’t always overhaul and entire script to fit a character sometimes it’s just easier to add them in and change a few things around you don’t like there’s the door
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Michelexx13

@dinorexcelsior I can only give you one simple piece of advice: when you make a story and put a character that you created yourself, you can give it more importance in the story. Your stories are very good, but when you put a character you created, I just feel like I'm looking at a written version of a cartoon from a movie, but with an extra dialogue, it doesn't have a recurrence in the story
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flexfighter34

@dinorexcelsior Thanks. It's got a long way to go. Hope you like the names I came up with.
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