MISS SIMP

Jesus how am I this lame lmaooo 

@galacticbeing same pinch then (╥﹏╥) ✋

@-noodle_ exactlyyyyyyy

@diosadelabelleza Frl tho that's basically the only enjoyable thing

@-noodle_ :( 
            I hate school lol 
            The only good thing in that hell hole are my few friends

@littletownlady yessss ma'am, DO IT!!!! Epilogue would give the a proper ending, like it already has a good ending obviously but an epilogue would be a cherry on top 
            Ohhhhh, it paid tho, it is a fantastic book, it wasn't at all.
            Yeahh I noticed and it is perfect that way, it makes you acknowledge the character without ever letting the readers know he might be the one who is the villain 
            
            Ohhhhh, that's true the fight did pull me back it, that's the point where everything began clear.
            
            Wow!! I'm amazed!! This book is EXTREMELY GOOD even tho it's the first book! You have some serious talent!
            Welcome :))
            I think they were great as well. And I think the amount of time you invested in the book showed through the writing. Normally I read more kinkier smut tho, so I can't really compare it to something. But I think it was good.
             Yeah tbh I mainly read the book thinking it was a romance book but it wasn't and somehow even tho it's totally out of my genre, the book turned out to be something I'd definitely re read 

@diosadelabelleza i think i may just write an epilogue, to wrap things up further :))) - this book was so difficult for me to write, it really tested my writing abilities as a writer, because i had to try and keep everyone on the edge of the seat and interested, hence it took me years to write! i am glad it wasn’t super predictable who the killer was, if you noticed his introduction was very mellow throughout. but it was always going to be him. 
            
            i appreciate your constructive criticism very much, after that bombing/ shooting stuff, it went a little confusing because i wanted to create like a melting hot point kind of scene where everyone’s all confused what’s happening, like it all gets muddled up and then of course elijah has his last fight and it all blows up from there and pulls readers back in. 
            
            this is my first mystery thriller book on here/ i don’t even think i’d attempt another, because they’re so hard to write. 
            
            thank you for adding to your list and recommending to your friends. 
            
            lastly - just so i can learn from more feedback, do you think the smut/ sexual scenes were okay? that wasn’t the focus of the story anyways, nor was her romantic relationship. the main point is to find out how her dad died. 

@littletownlady I loved the book and the characters, I love love love Spider,tho I still don't know his real name  and Belle, she's someone I would like to hang out with irl, the rest of the characters were also VERY good 
            Yeahhh it was in 3rd person but I don't mind reading it, I like to keep my mind open to as much as I can
            The ending was absolutely the BEST! I asked my friends to read the book as well.
            I love the fact that the plot was absolutely amazing, no one knew that what was to come till the very end, the amount of plot twists in the book is astonishing. 
            It wasn't, predictable at all to be honest, but if we read the story with proper attention, we realise that he was the only killer possible in the last line of the second last chapter (which was very important according to me, if there wasn't any proper introduction of him, the ending wouldn't make sense)
            But that was the only thing which was slightly predictable atleast to me, but the baby and baby daddy was something I never expected, even the rest of the plot twists. 
            If you want some constructive criticism then I would suggest that in ur upcoming books not to do the same thing you did the chapter after the bomb and shooting and all went down 
            I found myself a bit lost that time like what was going on, I think the story got a bit messy that time 
            But overall I LOVED ur book and even added it to my "books that own my heart" reading list if u didn't notice!!! 

@diosadelabelleza Thank you so much, sweetie. I sincerely appreciate your support, you really made my day. I fully understand and hope my book is worth your time. Stay awesome, babes✨

@TiffanyAWolfe For sure!
            I'll add it to my library straight away but I'll read it after I finish the current books I'm reading :)

@XxRiah916Xx Npp! :)

@diosadelabelleza thank you so much! 

@XxRiah916Xx Hey, I'll check it out for sure and give my review as well. <3

@StanOfLust I'll check it out for sure, once I complete the book I am currently reading