diptiray

Thank you can you read it and tell me your opinion

@Si987654321 Hi  No worries. Thanks for stopping by and I wish you the very best with your novel 

@diptiray okay 
            Thank u for reply 
            And sorry for late reply 
            Okay if in future u post book related content please do tell me i will follow u 
            Thanku

@kukpru Thank you so much! You put so much effort into writing all of this, and I really appreciate it. The points you mentioned will definitely help me when I'm writing future chapters. Also, the way you caught how Sara feels and why she thinks she's a side character was completely on point. That's actually the exact feeling I had in mind when I was writing this, so it was really nice to see you understand it so well.
            
            I do have Instagram, but I'm not very active on it. It's been really hard for me to post regularly, especially when it comes to book-related content.

When sara come her home she said “ at least someone is happy to see me” does it mean her family also not consider her as important person thats y nobody knows about her in the world or know only about that ashfords had a daughter but nobody who is it ( just like james mention in his pov) if its true i can say why she walk away from james because it already happened to her once so she didn’t not want to hurt again so she walk away because she was never a priority ( i feel sad for her)
            So now they had a face off is it same wound on her hand which she got from accident if yes so now he notice itanyway how does it matter now because he didnt notice it in first place so why concern for her now “ how u got hurt” may be thats y she said its a knife cut( so now he saw she is hiding about wound and what about when she got it doesnt he had a basic tendency to ask are u ok even if he feel she is perfect find and rossie needs help but he can ask are u ok but no he totally forget about it) its makes me angry on him 
            Please do tell him how she get that wound and how he didnt have the basic manner to ask her how are u after accident and make him regret to yell on it 
            Why he is interested now in her what left to say why cant he leave her alone why now want to be in same room as her why now
            I hope he will realised his mistakes and regret it and hope to see redemption phase too and hope that sara will become his life main character not that background or side character 
            and hope sara wont forgive him easily and hope to see her to love herself more because when she starts to love herself she will become main character in her story because when u love yourself people will love u too 
            Thats for all 
            Will read it after my exam 
            Hope i didnt offend u if i do please tell me 
            
            P.S. are u on insta for your wattpad books ?
            If u are please tell ur id 
            Thanku