currently feeling guilty about absolutely betraying my laurelica readers all those years ago --- should i follow the advice of my child brother and write a new chapter in which one of the characters gets taken by a creature, and the others must find a map in a secret jungle temple and must endure many trials to reach it. Once they get their hands on the map, they use it to find the big bad creature/villain, and battle it and its minions for their lives as well as their friend's (this may sound dark, but one of the people die)! And then, it's five years later, where I may choose what happens next.