disnrd_anna

Hi. Just read your work. I really think it's pretty and would go a long way. Just an advice form a novice. I think you should work on spacing out the paragraphs, and conversations. It would go a long way in making it more presentable and easier to read. No offense intended. Take care, and have a nice day. 

Hi. Just read your work. I really think it's pretty and would go a long way. Just an advice form a novice. I think you should work on spacing out the paragraphs, and conversations. It would go a long way in making it more presentable and easier to read. No offense intended. Take care, and have a nice day. 

Hi. Just read your work. I really think it's pretty and would go a long way. Just an advice form a novice. I think you should work on spacing out the paragraphs, and conversations. It would go a long way in making it more presentable and easier to read. No offense intended. Take care! 

Hello u wouldn't mind going through my story BMTH and coment, It has some faults, but it's in edition , Kisses 
          I'm speak spanish! Have a nice day