Diana A Coman

@ZoedLX  I did :)

Hey who made your story covers? They're good =)

Of course :) but it's gonna take a while..

Hello! Can you critique my story No Way Out? :) Saw your post on a thread. thanks if ever!

@INeedMyPurpleBack you're very welcome :)

Thanks for the fan! (:

thanks @misskatiel. I will correct it soon. Yeah, I'm not very good at typing :/ 
          Thanks for telling me about the full stops, I will take more care in the future :)

Hiya I've briefly looked at the first paragraph and obvious mistakes are the misuse of full stops, there is one in the middle of a sentence cutting it up and one used after a question mark that is not needed, i havent looked the whole way through but just scan through and check using COPS (capital letters for names, places and begginings,Punctuation and spellings)