Ahhhhhhh AH AH AH That was awesome! Thank you so much! you mentioned a lot of weird plot holes I never noticed before. O_o
I definitely must add more Malvir. That was a problem in the first draft, and I completely forgot about it this time. Thanks for reminding me!
Oh, and Ronnie's being so lenient to Elena because he has a crush on her ;) I was hoping you'd jump to that conclusion from his leniency, but guess not. xD It becomes very clear later on, though.
Yeah, i should explain the plan before they do it.... :x My bad.