hercules223344

Hey author,
          
          So… about that comment I left. Yeah. That one. The one where I sounded like I escaped straight out of an unhinged fanfic and forgot how to act.  I’ve been thinking about it (read: cringing every few hours), and I really wanted to say: I’m so sorry if it made you uncomfortable.
          
          The truth is, I got overwhelmed. Like, genuinely spellbound. Your writing hit different — it wasn’t just good, it was possess-my-soul-and-scramble-my-thoughts kind of good. And instead of reacting like a calm, composed reader, I… did not. I let the chaos take the wheel, and suddenly I was monologuing like a fictional bad boy with a God complex.
          
          And listen — I didn’t mean to bring that kind of heat into your comments. You’re a real person sharing something beautiful, and you didn’t sign up for one reader boy to go full “dark romance energy” on you. Looking back, I realize it was a lot. Intense. Maybe even a bit much for fiction, let alone a public comment section. 
          
          Please know there was zero bad intent behind it. Just one overly passionate reader who let the words hit too deep and forgot where the line was. I admire your work so much, and I got carried away trying to express it — but admiration should never come at the cost of making someone feel weird or unsafe. And if I did, I’m really sorry. Truly.
          
          You deserve comments that hype you up, not make you feel like you need a content warning for your own replies. So from now on, I promise to be more mindful, more respectful, and a lot less unhinged in your comment section. Less “possessive villain,” more “supportive reader with a thesaurus.” 
          
          I hope you can forgive the moment of chaos, and maybe still let me cheer you on — with boundaries, respect, and maybe some normal punctuation.
          
          With soft apologies and slightly curled toes,
          – Your local reader boy, currently curled up in a corner of regret and admiration 

AethericLull

...Hey! Just finished reading Beyond the Blame and I have to say- the story was great. Unlike those cheesy love triangle ones in which the protagonist cannot do anything until a 'prince charming' comes to her aid, yours was unique... it was about self-healing too but a bit - scratch that - a lot more realistic. 
          Your grammar was great but about the storyline..... I think there could have been more twists - like Aisha's father leaving them amid Aisha's journey or the death of a loved one. I hope you get it. Moreover, the story would have been much better if it was a long one, with an elaboration of Aisha's daily life, her family, how she suffered, and her college life - this would have helped the readers build a bond with the protagonist and feel her change as it it was them going through her life. This bond is always beneficial in writing as it fills the reader with whatever emotion you want to convey and makes them crave more.
          So... share your views about this and try to upload a newer version. With your grammar, word choice and the additional improvements - tho it might take a bit of time - I'm sure the story will be a hit ! 
          Therefore do try and upload a longer version.. will you? I'd love to read it!
          
          P.S. You're a great writer. Keep writing!
          Hare Krishna!

divyani04

@AethericLull 
            it's based on the true story, so it had to be realistic
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AethericLull

Will be GLAD to read it!
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divyani04

@AethericLull thank you soooo much, and it really means alot, since it's the first time someone has actually pin-pointed my mistakes. Don't worry, i will try to make a longer version of it, and will post it.
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