diya_wrts

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Can't believe I'm actually putting up this shit on public. 
          	I just published "2  0  1  5" of my story "All My Life". https://www.wattpad.com/1625819660?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=diya_wrts

diya_wrts

So I've a story draft idling in my drive. Only four chapter of this story is laid out, barely one thousand word and I'm already losing the spark to write what do you all say if I post those in here... just in case. Is anyone up for reading a really messy half asked writing? 

diya_wrts

"Death is beautiful, because its fair to everyone."
          
          It's from a movie, you know when I first heard it It really stuck with me, I used to use it everywhere and nowhere in writing. Now as I grow older the dialogue seems wrong in so many different ways. Death is never equal. The death of a eight year old from rape and a 80 year old who had a natural death is never the same. The first will remember this world as the trinity of evil the other will pass in a peaceful stance remembering life was good. Then they both will be buried of course, but you see the thing even their funeral won't be equal. One will be remember for the worst of her life, how her life was stolen from her the other will be remember for all the good she did, the memories she made perhaps the bad ones as well.
          
          Life and death, the most common ground of life isn't fair to all, yet in the very same world we preach of justice. The fact that law exist is the proof how much humans are terrified of their very own race, how far they are willing to go for greed. After all humans are the only being that's capable of birthing another human and a monster at the same time.

swadesigal

Hey beautiful! I hope you're doing well :)
          I apologize for reaching out without permission. I'm currently working on a story titled 'Chaahat - The Desire', and I've put a lot of heart into this story and would deeply appreciate any feedback or support you'd be willing to give.
          Thanks for considering, and I hope you enjoy the read!
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          CHAAHAT THE DESIRE the power of love, the power of evil, the power of self obsession, desire to achieve something and to want someone.
          Everyone desire to have her but no one has seen her.
          She is like a delicate flower that everyone wants to enjoy which she doesn't want to be. But she knows that she is strong enough to fight them and she will win.
          but is she really going to win?
          
          ✨ A story of love, betrayal, power, and revenge.
          ✨ Where emotions collide and secrets destroy.
          ✨ Where desire can either make you... or ruin you.
          
          When truth hides behind lies....who do you trust?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410502985-chaahat-the-desire?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=swadesigal&fbclid=PAb21jcARbGwZleHRuA2FlbQIxMQBzcnRjBmFwcF9pZA81NjcwNjczNDMzNTI0MjcAAae0YFkOVfHZh8vIIYoln3bR8AR5q-1Z_KfrrdRoW01-jfj6u4920H5tueY0zg_aem_Gc3Kdk9IiReZxO-hbgtbmg

diya_wrts

@swadesigal I usually don't read preppy romance books. However since you reached out personally I'll make an exception. Good luck with your book.
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diya_wrts

Next time I do a follow for follow I might as well specify that I don't want to stay connected with dead people. God people are you all only here to gain a few extra likes on your story, 50% of my entire follower list is just 
          People who sent me reading requests and then disappeared. I just wanted to talk about books with someone. I read all kind of genre.

DoveVee8

@diya_wrts awww
            At least you've got me now and I don't plan on leaving u anytime soon 
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diya_wrts

You don't know how happy I'm that you replied. I've joined so long ago, back then we were all teens. It was like a daily routine yapping about books on wattpad for hours. After l joined college our entire group has scattered, I lost my previous account... its just this attachment I've to this place that prevents me from leaving.
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DoveVee8

@diya_wrts I'm so sorry, I'm not really on Wattpad like that anymore. Wanna talk somewhere else?? 
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diya_wrts

I'm up for a reading streak. If anyone has any completed book in their shelves you can leave the link in here. If anyone needs reviews I'm up for it as well.

diya_wrts

I re-read the poems. The only notable critic I could find about your writing is the rhythm,  it feels like you try a little too hard to make the lines rhythm. I don't think it's potentially necessary that all the lines match the rhythm one after another. Additionally I think you should do a little work on poems and their structure. As far as I'm aware there's specific formats on poems and sonnets that traditional Poets follow. Those are merely a friendly suggestion, not critical judgment. Sorry for the late reply. Best wishes for your future.
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diya_wrts

@AshirbadBhattacharya I don't understand much about poetry but I'll try and let you know after I re-read it.
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AshirbadBhattacharya

@diya_wrts thank you so much i would love if you comment on the poetry any improvements required
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diya_wrts

Anyone else who watched the cdrama hidden love?

diya_wrts

@DoveVee8 yeah, but the book version isn't really my favourite. It keeps treating sang jhi like a kid. It gets annoying at some point. I mean they have 5 year age difference, not 10 years.
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DoveVee8

@diya_wrts I didn't even know there was a novellll
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diya_wrts

I usually don't watch romantic dramas, but I really loved this one. They have a healthy bond. Unlike most cdrama the characters actually looked their age,  it was realistic. In the novel they have a daughter in the epilogue.
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