PoonaFat

Hey djdjer
          
          Can you please check out my story, so far only the prolouge is out but i would like some constructive critisism. I want to know if i should continue it or not :S 
          
          It'll mean alot to me and I'll give you a huge cyber hug :) 
          Oh and if you want I'll read your book and become a fan...but just let me know) 
          
          Vote, Fan and plz plz Comment xx 
          
          Peace out 
          PoonaFat