dnzgrey

MIN YOONGI, FIRST LOVE IS UP!!
          	
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/p7DyQh85mV

lemonsodaflavour

So far reading your work.
          I really just have to say
          Many fanfics skip the emotion, the feeling in the story. Not the sad feeling that you feel worser after reading a messed up fanfic but the feeling  of connection with the fanfic seems to be always missing whenever I read other fanfics. 
          
          But in your work 
          There’s small moments that touches my heart 
          I think if you develop it further you’ll be able to capture the emotions of the reader and connect them with the story even more. 
          
          So far out of other samuel fanfics I’ve read 
          Only you’ve achieved a bit of this 
          So I see the potential that you can do it better in your writing! 
          
          Idk what it is that made your story amazing. Maybe the simply cute sweet but affective moments or just the way you wrote it. 
          As a reader that’s what we would like to expect in a “x reader” fanfic and its surely my type. 
          
          I’d totally recommend your story to other garnets because it’s definitely a worth reading fanfic. 
          
          I felt so satisfied, that I had the urge to give you appreciation for your work because you deserve to know that you did so well! 
          Like yes finally a writer who actually made me feel this way.  
          I’m just so impressed and I enjoyed reading the story. I hope you keep continuing it. 
          Please stay motivated and believe that you can do even better too.

dnzgrey

@rs7284 Anyway. Hi again.  I actually edited a lot part in my story.  I already published it again. Do you mind reading it and tell me what you think?
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dnzgrey

@rs7284 omg! I just opened my wattpad account and this popped in my notif. Thank you so much! I'm really tearing up! Thank you, really. This is the first time to receive a lot of loves and support from all of you. While reading other readers comments, i feel really inspired but reading yoyr message. I felt  motivated, inspired and many other emotions! Thank you for giving me advice, I didn't know that someone really appreciate my works. Sometimes i'm really scared because i'm not really good at english because i'm a filipino and i'm just improving. I'm really really nervous so sometimes i stopped writing stories because i'm out of words to say. I can't express what i really want because i'm not good at english. But still thank you so much! I'll do better this time !
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