dolly_cherie
HOLY FWAKING SHT NEW UPDATE YALL NEW UPDATERE FOR NEWWW BOOOKKKKK !!!!!!
dolly_cherie
dolly_cherie
So with the new fanfic cuties, I made an update it’s gonna be half SMAU modern, and half writing!! I just finished the character profiles so we’re gonna be litty up here !!
dolly_cherie
I would post it with just the profiles but I think I owe u guys a chapter before I do that
dolly_cherie
Hahaha new fanfic… new HP fanfic alert… hehe hahaha….
DetectiveMizuki
@dolly_cherie I sense peak that will leave me flabbergasted, with a shortage of oxygen from laughing, bruised foot from kicking my feet too much, and possibly a new treasure chest of imaginary scenarios.
annie28stevens
Hiiii, i jus wanted to say that u write absolutely Brilliantly amd dont change your writing style because of someone else, that's their problem YOU'RE DOING AMAZING AND I HOPE YOU UPDATE:))))
dolly_cherie
@annie28stevens THANK YOU SO MUCH I LITERALLY LOVR YOU AND YES ILL TRY TO UPDATE !! <3333
MALluvsBOO
Hii okay so this is my spam account, and this was gnawing at me, I saw your post and I wanted to clear some things up, ofc you don’t have to respond but honestly I just felt terrible. In no way shape or form were my comments meant to make you feel uncomfortable or offend you. Your writing is perfect the way it is and you shouldn’t change it just cause some comments. As for the comments I made. The comment where I had said tone down the obsession, I am very aware it was a yandere fanfic, but It was just supposed to be a joke all of the yandere fanfics I have read I had seen comments like that and I kinda just picked them up cause they would make me giggle, as for the other comments, they were just supposed to be like talking to name, I’m not sure if that makes sense. Saying things like “girl what’d you expect…” and things like that like as if talking to a friend almost, that’s something else I picked up but they were just meant to be jokes, But I didn’t mean it literally, I thought your writing was really funny and interesting cause that’s how the chapter you posted were, I never intended to be rude so I’m not sure if that’s how it came out, they were just meant to be silly little comments like as if I were talking to name myself. I don’t know if I explained this good enough but that’s all, I’m sorry for the comments, your book was already good as it was and I didn’t mean to offend you, ofc you can delete this or just not respond but I wanted to kinda explain myself and the comments I made, besitos
dolly_cherie
@MALluvsBOO Hi!! Thanks for clearing things up, and I’m sorry too!! Sometimes comments can get intended in the wrong way, and I’m sorry if I was too sensitive- I didn’t know it was a joke!! Don’t be sorry, accidents happen from both ends!! I didn’t want anything too out of hand to happen but thank you- for explaining, really !! You don’t have to stop the comments at all, if it’s intended as a joke, then it’s a joke, I just didn’t know and that wasn’t fault!! Thank you for explaining your reason, and have a good day !!
acid-ixx
hii baby i finally got the free time yesterday to actually read your entire story since (i will confess) i left it to marinate until there's enough chapter for me to read in one go— and omg lena, your story is so good. like, not just 'i read this fic and it's good but i'll probably bury it in the back of my mind good' but rather the type of good that i can reread over and over again with how no scenes are boring, too little, too much. ESPECIALLY the cedric scenes, that's the cherry on top. i love how his obsession is portrayed as gentle, calculating, yes, but there's an undertone of worship where his decisions ultimately lead to whatever makes the mc happy and safe *right beside him*. i also love how he's always finding a way to get as physically close to the mc; like if the mc is a magnetic field then ced is the greatest magnet there is.
there's also lorenzo berkshire, my good looking slytherin boy. there's such a big whiplash i feel towards him because one minute he's all so lovey-dovey, the highschool guy with a smitten crush archetype, but then we get glimpses of how dark he actually could get outside of the mc's perspective. sure he's like the omega to mc's alpha but with a reputation such as his that we could only dig up from all the other girls he's flirted with before, him trying to get romantically close to the mc might just lead into some stumbles within their *friendship*.
acid-ixx
and i'm so excited for the next chapter and whatever shenanigans will be thrown in the mc's way especially the lore about the mc's family and how every individual obsession will flourish as the years go by? very excited to see it all, but take your time, focus on your school, and i hope you get all the kamote (sweet purple potatoes) in the world
acid-ixx
as for the pop references sprinkled throughout the story. honestly it's so hilarious to read through paragraphs and then suddenly having to back up and reread the previous one because your humor is in the same wavelength as mine i also headcanon that the reason why the mc knows a lot about the muggle world so much (despite being heavily sheltered as well as a pure blood) is because of their two year long bond with hermione, and i can see them both sharing interests with the world of one another if that were the case. just two besties trading facts about magical artifacts and what a toaster is. also the mc saying fart is funny, seeing as you did say that they do swear, but in practice, they can't because one, their grandma, and two, hermione. though it'd be even funnier if they update the fart and start to use other words for other vulgar ones (i don't allow my younger sibling to swear, so they often end up saying "holy shizzles" or "what the freaky-frackle-doodoo" and many more i'm serious about that).
but yeah !?? i'm going off in a tangent and this is simply the general stuff that i like. i haven't even gone into the specifics like how i love the way you portray emotions and actions and the descriptive use of words to describe scenery. very inspiring to me tbh, now i want to actually write a very long series for hp with the obscurial reader idea i made. in fact, i read your fic until it was like, 2-3am-ish ??? and i kept giggling like a maniac under the sheets when i saw OLIVER WOOD as one of the love interests too. i don't even READ X FEMALE READERS but yours was done so well enough that i end up reading them as ambiguous instead. thank u for being so talented, lena, you've just thrown more logs into the flames in my heart, the spark of interest i had for hp has become a raging fire and i may as well hyperfixate about it for months...
acid-ixx
those are my top two favorite love interests, truth be told, with fleur (despite her lack of scenes since we're still in year 3), hermione, cho (i have favoritism issues), and theo (both). but let's not neglect the mc/reader like i did in my fics... lena, my pookie bear, my cocoa butter kisses, i absolutely LOVE the mc. i've seen some discourse with the shy mc archetype, especially with your recent post about a certain someone on your fic who doesn't like how *shy* the mc is— but honestly, they're not shy to me just heavily introverted, awkward, and with an (unwanted) penchant for death. speaking as a shy person btw, since i actually act like the mc irl back when i was like in my teenage years (maybe even now), and i don't get the hate for their awkwardness when they're literally someone who didn't literally have friends or companions outside of like, juju, their grandma, fleur and especially hermione, the culprit for their loneliness.
if you were shoved into a whole world of having to socialize with a bunch of people with diverse personalities and backgrounds, with no prior experience on how to communicate with strangers when all your life you're just used to a stead routine, then yeah, you're gonna be *real* awkward, stumbling over words and trying to escape that wretched moment. the mc is me, i am the mc. as much as i love confident mc's, or nonchalant (alpha) ones, i also love those who are easily flustered because THAT IS ME (and sometimes the way the people write the former trope seems performative to me, i won't lie).
DetectiveMizuki
I am in a dire NEED to know more about Y/n's grandfather, is he a pureblood? does he own a booming business? is he famous? was he a powerful wizard? was he baddie like Anora?
dolly_cherie
When I said “them” not being the richest, I mean his family and him, so that’s why not tons of people wanted to be with him yk, especially since tons of people in the wizarding world knew how his mother was ill and didn’t want to help whatsoever !!
dolly_cherie
@DetectiveMizuki EEE TY BBY FOR READING !! So basically Elias, (name)’s grandpa, was a pureblood!! But he was rather much a little lowish middle class, and had a mother that was a little ill, that’s why he was private healer (but once they moved into a muggle city; he took the job as a doctor!!) so he could help with his family, and also so he could support his mother and anora even if she didn’t need any supporting LMAO, he wasn’t exactly a powerful wizard, that leaned more into anora !! But yes HE’S ATTRACTIVEEEEEE, but with them not being the richest he was a little looked down, so when he met anora, he knew her family- they were rich and known for also being pureblood but he liked that she didn’t judge him or care for his status !! In my story, it’s mentioned that the both of them moved to a muggle city to get away from everything, and that’s after fortunately he was able to get his mother back to a stable health!! So both anora and Elias make bank !!
acid-ixx
lena, bbg... i am writing a hp fanfic, i fear it may be long and angsty... (obscurial reader)
acid-ixx
@dolly_cherie HELP IM DRYING but it's gonna be real dark and messed up because that's the way of (reader's) life. i wanna give u (spoilery) details about it but it depends on u
neptune_rising
possible cedric fic queen??? :p
annie28stevens
HII PLEASE update hp various story, it's amazing omg