domieon

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          	Hi guys I updated two chapters, please check, thanks for all the support throughout the story 

Nie_Yingxue

@domieon It is really nice shimei!! 
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Ritchellr18r

hi did you receive my messages about my suggestion what you think I really sorry to make feel uncomfortable or bother 
          
          
          or waster your time so much for this I hope you don’t get mad or feel offended because of me?
          
          
          
          Also can you do it please but of course when your finished this book I will doing it I don’t have time also can you keep everything that wrote your down too pretty please darling!
          
          
          Also did you receive the photo I send about how their daughters would be look like 
          
          
          but you any questions or concerns tell me so I can clarify to you I soon possible!

Anshika234567

Thanks for voting. Do read the other chapters 

domieon

@Anshika234567 your story is very nice, I read it through website as Wattpad is not working well for me sometimes, I am trying to vote/ comment but the network problem is making it very difficult it's actually third time I am reading your story while waiting for an update
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Ritchellr18r

I sorry if this idea wasn’t your expected but if you don’t like because it’s to long or because the ships I suggested or also did you have questions or comments for my idea 
          
          
          and also when you have time to read it I hope you don’t hate me or be angry at me for this I really sorry if suggestion sound a little harsh or confusing for you but you have questions please tell me so I clarify for you?

Ritchellr18r

Also if you see this photo it’s how I think Nie huiasang, Wei wuxian and Jiang Cheng future daughters would be look like  Also I think have one more  idea what you think about when wei wuxian and lan zhan died, 
            
            both lan xichen and yanli give them both hima and yuan their parents spiritual swords 
            
            
            Like xichen give lan yuan’s bichen and yanli give Himawari’s subían 
            
            And Huiasang give zizhen baxia and for his daughter (Hanami)
            
            he give her little sword who it’s similar to her older brother and fan like his! 
            
            
            
            Like the original story Jin ling  inherited his father sword but now in this story the plot it’s change now it’s A-yuan and his sister turn 
            
            inherited their late parents spiritual swords!
            
            
            And last thing can how about instead Lan yuan hate jiang Cheng  for killed his parents like Jin ling in the original story 
            
            
            it’s Himawari all because the bad influence and the manipulation the eldest of gusu lan give her over the years!
            
            
            
            Also can you add nicknames for them I mean for their daughters like:
            
            
            for Himawari her family and friend’s would be call her “Hima” and For Hanami she would be call “Hana”
            
            
            
            For Jiang Xiang she would be called  “A-Xiang) and for Mei Feng she would be call “Mei”
            
            
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Ritchellr18r

Hi I sorry to disturb I want just ask did you take suggestions go new books and also did you have discord if you don’t it’s fine sorry to waste your time?

Ritchellr18r

@domieon Wait when you have time to read this also have more idea how about their titles:
            
            
            for the lotus Trios and Nie huiasang tittles:
            
            
            jiang Yanli tittles:
            
            -Leader Jiang 
            -Young madam Jin
            -Yueguang xia Shengkai of lianhua : lotus flower in the moonlight”
            
            
            
            
            Wei Wuxian tittles:
            
            -Secong madam Lan
            -the sweet swan of dawn of gusu lan 
            -Xiao-Feiying (little Scarlet Sakura) 
            
            
            
            Also With the time Wei Wuxian also won the title of legendary queen of the Gusu lan,the Yilling village and Jiang clan.That title is not just a nickname, 
            
            
            but also something himself has earned with much dedication and respect!
            
            
            
            
            
            Jiang Cheng titles: 
            
            -Yilling Patriarch 
            -First madam lan
            -Sandu shengshou
            
            
            
            
            Nie Huiasang titles:
            
            -Madam Nie
            -head-Shaker
            -The beautiful rose of Nie clan (by mingjue and zonghui)
            
            
            
            Now for the kids tittles:
            
            Himawari despite her young age has earned several titles such as:
            
            
            -Princess of the Gusu lan clan
            -Young Lady Lan 
            -the angel of beauty (by the juniors)
            -the golden fairy and sunflower of the Jin clan 
             -the golden lotus of the Jiang clan (by jiang Cheng)
            
              
            
            
            
            Hanami, like Himawari, earned several official titles such as:
            
            -Young madam Nie 
            -the warrior princess and the shooting star of the nie clan 
            
            
            
            
            jiang Xiang tittles:
            -Young madam Jiang, 
            -the violet storm of jiang clan 
            
            
            
            
            Mei Feng tittle:
            
            -Ming-Long-Yi
            
            
            
            
            their eldest siblings tittles:
            
            
            lan Yuan titles:
            
            -Young Master Lan 
            -Leader of Gusu Lan clan 
            
            
            
            Lang Jingyi:
            -Un lan 
            -Young master Jiang
            
            
            
            Nie Zizhen tittle:
            
            -Young master Nie 
            -Hong-Gang-Qingfu (Master of Red Steel) his tittle it’s after his late father (Nie mingjue)
            
            
            
            How I think their personalities would be like:
            
            
            lan Yuan personality be like Lan Zhan and himawari be like a mix of Lan zhan and Wei wuxian 
            
            
            
            Zizhen be like huiasang and Hanami be like a mix of Mingjue and huiasang 
            
            
            Same with Jingyi is a mix of Xichen ans Jiang Cheng and Xiang is like Jiang Cheng but with less angry problems and more expressing
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Ritchellr18r

@domieon can the children be their biological kids:
            
            
            Wangxian kids:
            
            Lan Yuan, courtesy name Sizhui (15 years old)
            
            Himawari Lan-Wei (10 years old daughter)
            
            
            
            Xicheng kids:
            
            Lan Yi, courtesy name Jingyi (16 years old)
            
            Jiang Xiang, courtesy name Ziyue means little moon’ (8 years old daughter)
            
            
            
            
            Jin zixuan x Jiang Yanli kid:
            
            
            Jin ling, courtesy name Rulan (15 years old)
            
            
            
            
            Niecest kids:
            
            Nie Xin, courtesy name Zizhen (17 years old)
            
            Hanami Nie (6 years old daughter)
            
            
            
            
            also I have another question did you any ships for wen Ning in mind 
            
            
            because I think he also deserves someone to love with for after everything he going through in the future if you don’t can you keep like put him with song Lan and maybe put them have an the 12 years old adopted daughter call “Mei feng” be best friend with Hanami, Himawari and Jiang Xiang!
            
            
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Ritchellr18r

can the ships be:
            
            Wangxian
            Xicheng 
            Song Lan x wen Ning
            Xue yang x Xiao Xingchen 
            Nie huiasang x Nie mingjue 
            Jiang Yanli x Jin zixuan 
            Lan Yuan x Jin ling
            Lan Jingyi x Nie Zizhen 
            
            
            Tops be:
             Nie Mingjue 
            Lan Zhan
            Jiang Cheng
            Song Lan
            Xue Yang
            Jin ling
            Zizhen
            
            
            Bottoms be:
            Nie huiasang 
            Wei wuxian 
            Lan xichen 
            Wen Ning
            Xiao Xingchen 
            Lan Yuan
            Lan Jingyi 
            
            
            I really hope you you don’t get mad or hate me for this you can add this the reason why the Nie brothers can be cultivator partners it’s because the Nie sect it’s the only one in the world that cultivated if it is allow to take cultivate partner 
            
            
            
            Regardless of whether they are brothers, sister or cousins and everything because of their way of cultivating resentful energy in addition to the fact that their sword’s 
            
            
            
            whereas the Jin, Lan and Jiang sects cannot! Even the wen sect is almost the same as long as they are not brothers or the main family everything it’s fine or 
            
            
            You can put them like they not blood related maybe huiasang it’s adopted but he doesn’t know like before his mother pass away she give him to the late leader Nie to accept him and raised him like he was his own child!
            
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