SongOfTheOcean

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good morning! how are you? could you maybe have the chance to check out my story and leave a comment about what you honestly think? it's about this girl who is on the run for taking her son away from her cruel ex-husband. he hires someone to kill her, but thanks to strange floating fire spirits she finds a ruin deep in the forest where no one would find her, but upon exploring the place she comes face to face with a large fire creature that warns her to leave his territory...but without her son. now she must uncover a dark mystery about why the play is in ruin. as well as why the beast is so hostile and won't let her take her son with her. thanks :)