D.J. M. Cruda

Hi Guys... please read The Flight to the Garden... it will be just a short read. :) and tell me something about it.

The World Tree is hold up for a while now....
          I have numerous things to write. But, I need to see the prequel of The Flight to the Garden. And to arrange it as one book. Talking about... Lengthening it to some serious hardening of the plot... but I'll never post it for some reasons. I may want to gain something from it.
          Maybe it would take ten years, like Tolkien's TLOTR, to boom or to be scrapped out of fame. Nonetheless, I am still trying to conjure the best ideas my mind and soul has to offer - to produce the best mother-and-son story of some fantasy world, I had just created. :)

Hey thanx for following me also can u plz read my story and tell me what you think about it i would be gratefull it u vote

And I wonder why I do not like those books. 
          Maybe because of the central character who has always the hard things to do and I can expect that whoever that person is, with the reader's usual competence, can overcome such.
          And the world... it was so small... it had no room for more experiences. It never varies. They have this ,always: "For the sake of Humanity, we have to make a rebellion, an insurgency and let us be free!! yey... something like that." 
          Yes! FREEDOM... the widely used motif for greatness since ancient time.
          HOwever you may look at its plots, differ from others, they will always attain the freedom they were looking for.
          I am full about the freedom. In the case of the JrrTolkien's masterpieces, they are already free folks, just fighting to remain as is, and peace is what they are looking for, remind you, or at least that's what I know. (And right,  i'm a fan of his)
          Though, being Free is Peace, but there is a Free comes with trouble - for example, breaking out of the Prison. you get it?
          And finally, being ordinary is always means you are beautiful like Cinderella and will have happily ever after. Underdogs are always the hero of rebel type of story, or perhaps the girl/heroine fights like a man and retains her kurtsy status because she loves a man. From being ordinary they became extraordinary, and they can talk loud to reason for, and they are selfish kind of people because they are always right - and that's what the writer wants, to be beautiful because they have this ordinary experience and produce some not-so-incredible wit out of it, or he/she has the sidekick who is the basis of his wit but actually the sidekick is the main person of the story. 
          And suggestions of my mind told me, it was never fun to read, because no matter of having a trilogy or anthology or saga out of it, they will end at one thing for sure. There will  be changes and that's all there is. Changes that will never even satisfy me for sure.

I am not  a fan of The Hunger Games, Divergent, or those things alike. What I'd like to read is with criteria:
          1. a wonderful world and creatures that are in the brink of destruction,
          2. already been destroyed and trying to resuscitate back to life, 
          3. tragic romance with incredibly powerful plot other than Romeo and Juliet schemes (powerful plot, which I mean tediously unfathomable experience, haha), 
          4. something that comes with an ancient war, 
          5. a fantastic story that incredibly that talks alot about the creation of a new world, if the sequel of the story is interesting though.
          
          so these books are...
          1. The Lord of  the Rings, The Hobbit (Where my Flight to the Garden is based)
          2. The Maze runner
          3.  Have you considered putting some romance in the Death Note, or recreating the title to Love Note of Death or something like that. Unfortunately, I haven't found a book like that... so I think I'll make some. :)
          4. The Lord of the Rings and the Hobbit are primarily stories always plotting with skirmishes and wars - and they are archival type of war.
          5.  Other than the Bible, I love JRRTolkien's Sylmarillion, or still the unfinished The World Tree.. 
          That's all. :)

hope ur day was great day

I used to take up accountancy then realized logic wasn't my thing so I transferred to Ab English Literature... Advance congratulations on graduating next year!!! :)

Hi! Thanks for following me, though I'm quite flabbergasted why. And I hope you don’t think I’m creepy for reading your bio. I guess from reading it, I felt a kinship to you. I also do the whole “read a lot, write a lot” thing you’ve got going on. And just like you, I started writing in notebooks until I found the courage to post my stories online. It’s still nerve-wracking to see them online and not knowing if they will be loved or not. So… thanks for following and I hope you have fun here in wattpad as well as in writing :)

Part 1 of the World Tree is out... :) Godbless :)

The World Tree (A short story) part 1 coming soon :)