dougmccourt61

Can't shoot in space 

cosmic_lattes

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dougmccourt61

Been reading a story by S. A. Lusher / obsidian _ Productions called Saturate. I guess Sean doesn't realize that you can shoot guns that use gun powder in space. No oxygen no . Someone should tell him cause it's kind of embarrassing. 

dougmccourt61

No problem. I would post it to him but he doesn't take criticism of any kind very well and has deleted me from commenting on his stories. I once told him that all his stories were the same and he took that bad. In hind site it may have been but was hoping to expand on that but he didn't give me the chance just blocked me. Hoping someone can educated him concerning space and guns
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The_Rogue_Writer

@dougmccourt61 i dont mean to seem rude but wouldn't it be better to pm it too him instead of posting it..not trying to be rude ..just saying
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