dowensly

@Fromessa Jacksonville,Florida

jev159

Hey! How are you? I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my book and give me some tips for what I can do to improve! <3

dowensly

I don't have that much to say just that it's a really good book that grabs u and that u tend to take a little bit long for something to happen like a argument or some thing so it would be awesome if u speed it up a little more as to give us some action as to not thing oh this book is boring or something
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