OMG. I was reading your story, and I'mr eally annoyed because I can't leave a comment. my vote/comment stuff isn't working!>:O
I'll just have to leave them here until they get fixed.(:
hahahahha(:
I relaly like the start of this!:D
Maybe it'll help if you split up the paragraphs up a bit, like every time someone new talks it's a new paragraph.c:
But other than that, I love the start!
It's really interesting!
I'm not really sure who niall Horan is, but if it's a book or movie.. it really makes me want to watch/read it!(:
brilliant work!(:
