Saint_Fodder
@dracofanfic20110715 Please do your comment is motivating me You are a new writer and its easier to learn from you guys because of your different writing styles.
Saint_Fodder
hi there, could you review my book for me and give me feedback on it I want to be serious at writing so any feedback from you would be of great help.
dracofanfic20110715
@Saint_Fodder hey! id love to. ive just read the first few sections but you've got a lovely hook on the ends of sentences so keep that up! You also do very well in terms of moving the story forwards, introducing and forming unique characteristics of new characters making them distinct and easily recognizable. Try checking your punctuation. it makes the book easier to read. I'd love to continue reading your story and giving you feedback if you'd like. One question tho.... why me?