mshollyx

hi babes,
          i’m loving your story ‘we fell and collided’, can’t wait till you update!
          i was hoping that you’d give my story a look, you don’t have to don’t feel pressured whatsoever. i just want to know your opinion on it if you have the time.
          hope your having a wonderful day, stay safe
          lots of love,
                            holly :)

dracoiamin3

@mrsmalfoywastaken 
            
            Hey love,
            
            Thank you so much for the feedback,  I will definitely try to apply it. I also just started writing and I’m just going with the flow of the story for right now. 
            
            I read the first chapter of your story and I love it so far! I like how there is lots going on and you have a great way with words. Definitely looking forward to your next uploads! 
            
            Also I’m dead ass laughing at the “though drella  sounds like umbrella”  I’m also loving your characters and can sense the ✨tension✨ between Hayley and Draco. 
            
            With love,
                       Vera :)
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mshollyx

hey,
            
            thank you so much, it means the world as i’ve only started writing❤️
            
            i love the story and, i don’t mean to sound offensive it is great, but maybe check some spelling errors and try using other words rather than ‘I’ at the beginning of a sentence. the advice is all thanks to my online classes
            
            i’m loving the dynamic between isabella and draco so far. i’m thinking isaco or drella for ship names, though drella sounds like umberella
            
            if it’s not too much i’d love some feedback aswell sorry but i’d really like to fully know what my story is like from a reader’s pov but you don’t have to
            
            but you are doing great and i’ll be waiting for that update, but don’t feel like you have to rush ;)
            
            lots of love,
                               holly
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dracoiamin3

Hey love, 
            
            Thank you so much! Ofc I will look at your story and an update will be coming soon (hopefully). If you have any recommendations or feedback for me on my story let me know!! 
            
            With love, 
                        Vera <3
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