dragonslayer200418
Can anyone tell me what you think of my first chapter of my story and tell me what you think
your_abnormal_weeb
I really like your story so far I don’t know if I’m qualified to give you advice ( I’m not) but I’d say make it a little more detailed other than that it’s really good and I can’t wait to read more !!!
-abnormal weeb
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