@tinysunfern hi there! thanks for the compliment! as for tips, just know. it's about the sensation and the buildup. sex is ALL about feeling and emotions and everything, so it's best to incorporate the internal thoughts and feelings of the character to give the reader the sensations of being more in the story, rather than just reading a very blank book. add adjectives and lots of feelings. it's also a good idea to add more story than "a character is in heat and someone takes advantage of it." if you make a lust fic, give buildup and backstory to the characters' attractions to the other character, as well as a valid reason. if it's rape, give the character reason to do this act that is often regarded as immoral.