theApocalypse369

I write Bls and I'm just a beginner so I would be really grateful if you could review and give feedback on my work.
          
          Sorry for being a bother. (//^∇^)/
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/380074279?utm _source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content =story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname= Rinatomii

theApocalypse369

@theApocalypse369 I don't mind if you give me feedback on both the stories.I would be really grateful!!(⁠人⁠⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠)
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dravenest17

Which story, or is it both?
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dravenest17

@theApocalypse369 I would gladly give feedback and advice 
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