MariahSinclair101
Thank u for your vote! I hope u r enjoying my story n would love to hear ur feedback
MariahSinclair101
You now have me looking over the story seeing where I might add a little something here and there. I also have the next chapter in works and I think it might pertain to more of what your talking about. The next chapter I have Mia expressing her feelings more as I'm focusing more on romantic then exotic on this one. Once I have it done by this weekend you'll have to let me know if it is more of what you were looking for. I think I might have been holding back because Mia has been trying to hide it from herself that how much she really has fallen for Jayce.
MariahSinclair101
No offense at all. I wish more people would let me know what they think. I welcome constructive criticism and will definitely take in what you've just said. Do you have any certain's parts in general where you think I should incorporate that? I did also take a peek at your book and I like the way you write. I have a lot of stories I'm trying to read but I've been focused on writing and I work mad hours. I'm fighting to keep my eyes open right now reading the story I'm on now but will get to yours. thank you for the votes also!!!
