dreamer_swas

hi this is my first ever story i hope you will give it a try 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/356317045-my-persuasive-king

Niti_Ink

Hi,
          Can you please read only 1 or 2 chapters of this book and continue only if you like it but do give it a chance....i promise you won't regret it....
          
          Aap... yahan?"
          He stopped just inches away.
          Too close.
          Their breaths tangled. Her heart pounded in her ears.
          " Akhirkar 6 mahine ki aankh micholi ke baad aap samne he mere..."
          "Pahli mulakat yaadgar honi chahiye na jaan...
          (leaning in, lips almost touching hers) please don't stop me..."
          The first brush of his lips against hers was gentle, almost too gentle for the intensity between them. But the moment he felt the warmth of her lips, the floodgates opened. The kiss deepened - demanding, possessive, and yet tender, as though he was trying to memorize every sensation.
          Once he finds her breathless, he left her lips with a pop sound and move little away just to see her now ruined lipstick and flushed chics...
          "Roshni...Tum meri ho..."
          "Rudra... I..."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393435757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Niti_Ink
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itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3 
          
          Im writting a new book called promises and im kind of new to this writting thing and ive only posted a few chapters so would you take a look at my book and tell me if i need to add anythibg to it amd how you feel about my writting. If its terrubke could you please tell me what i should do to improve it as i really enjoyed writting the few chapters... So if you do have the time woukd you please check it out and if you did like the book can you vote for all the chapters 
          
          And can you also follow me I'll follow you back 
          
          Thanks a lot for your time loveee<3
          

Ausush236_123

stoneheart1102

Hey!
          Hope u r doing fine. Sorry for invading ur conversation here without ur permission. But it's just if ur time permits, give my book a chance. I'll be glad if u do so. 
          
          Waiting for ur views.
          <3
          Stoneheart ♡.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/294756326?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=stoneheart1102&wp_originator=V8AdWixLuCzePM4SUzyA21WgIDuGDBDyLe54FuuVvxkgURVXjnXJZOKYFOLCBafyikroRGbakG1ht2%2FXz6bAcfrqvovlkrH%2Bn6M188kvomKRcNzTq1bHCYYBTON%2FaqSc

dreamer_swas

@stoneheart1102  loved the book ..... nice work
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BenazirCariaKhan

dreamer_swas

@BenazirCariaKhan thank you and you are welcome.....pls do write a review of what you think of the book and what I should improve.
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