dreamerlass

Hey guys
          	
          	I know it's been really long since I last posted anything as all but I genuinely wanted some feedback before I tried to think about some things that happened here a few months ago
          	
          	Is there anyone who thinks that I was not writing the emotions well in the story 'Fortitude'?
          	
          	Someone did mention on more than one occasion that it wasn't very well researched from a psychological aspect I guess but I want a genuine response from you guys about this issue

budstarc

Hi
          	  I think you asked this a while back. The story was well written but yes there were some issues. I believe that maybe some ideas felt a little archaic to me. But that may not be for everyone. Many people loved Vivaah as a movie but I did not. 
          	  So yeah it depends on the dynamic you are going for
          	  Hope you are doing okay
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Loml_mahi

@dreamerlass I also said earlier and will  say same thing again that I really love your work not only this book but every single Mahi related book , it can happen that few might started relating your book with real person or finding some adventurous twists and turns so that might create a bit of disliking towards the story but one who understands your writing style can never dislike it, I literally read all chapter of this book line by line because I find it simple ,peaceful and also filled with a bit of humor which makes it more captivating.
          	  
          	  At the end just want to say don't overthink or stress yourself over that just enjoy your writing as you used to. Please come back and start the book soon really missing your Sunday updates and our banters in comment section . Already waited for so long   so please resume the book soon
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twilight23-moon

@dreamerlass I don't know about others but I love your works a lot and also feel the bond between brothers and all. Not sugarcoating but I missed your stories and in sundays i kept coming here for update or just a oneshot updates because I love them. About emotions I laughed, i cared and also felt stress with the characters. All I can say is I love it. 
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dreamerlass

Hey guys
          
          I know it's been really long since I last posted anything as all but I genuinely wanted some feedback before I tried to think about some things that happened here a few months ago
          
          Is there anyone who thinks that I was not writing the emotions well in the story 'Fortitude'?
          
          Someone did mention on more than one occasion that it wasn't very well researched from a psychological aspect I guess but I want a genuine response from you guys about this issue

budstarc

Hi
            I think you asked this a while back. The story was well written but yes there were some issues. I believe that maybe some ideas felt a little archaic to me. But that may not be for everyone. Many people loved Vivaah as a movie but I did not. 
            So yeah it depends on the dynamic you are going for
            Hope you are doing okay
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Loml_mahi

@dreamerlass I also said earlier and will  say same thing again that I really love your work not only this book but every single Mahi related book , it can happen that few might started relating your book with real person or finding some adventurous twists and turns so that might create a bit of disliking towards the story but one who understands your writing style can never dislike it, I literally read all chapter of this book line by line because I find it simple ,peaceful and also filled with a bit of humor which makes it more captivating.
            
            At the end just want to say don't overthink or stress yourself over that just enjoy your writing as you used to. Please come back and start the book soon really missing your Sunday updates and our banters in comment section . Already waited for so long   so please resume the book soon
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twilight23-moon

@dreamerlass I don't know about others but I love your works a lot and also feel the bond between brothers and all. Not sugarcoating but I missed your stories and in sundays i kept coming here for update or just a oneshot updates because I love them. About emotions I laughed, i cared and also felt stress with the characters. All I can say is I love it. 
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dreamerlass

Hey guys 
          
          Sorry for disappearing like I did 
          Honestly I wasn't going to post anything so sson but the girls just did something that I've honestly been hoping for so long 
          
          I honestly can't believe my book turned out to be kinda true (obviously the details ended up being a little different, but I think everyone gets the point)
          
          PS: In case anybody doesn't get that reference then check out the link below 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1360805420-just-one-chance-scripting-herstory

twilight23-moon

@dreamerlass And I remember it hitting hard on Mahi bhai's birthday and I'm waiting for to happen that once again
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twilight23-moon

@_rsm07 Hehe.. who knows....
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budstarc

Hey. R things really alright? You are only very rarely active. Al good?

dreamerlass

@budstarc just sent you an email becuase I'm super impatient
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dreamerlass

@budstarc I'll definitely send you an email soon with the basic ideas that I've got for now and I'll also let you know once I do send it so that you don't keep waiting for too long
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dreamerlass

Hey guys 
          Sorry for the late update today but I kinda forgot to update and then got distracted by the World Cup match today 
          
          Btw did you know Pakistan hit their first six against India today in an ODI? And today was the 12th ODI between these two teams

dreamerlass

@KAD2327 I mean India has never lost a single match to Pakistan as far as I know regardless of the format but not even a single six in ODI shocked me
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KAD2327

@dreamerlass Yes i heard in the commentary it was such a shock but then again it was not knowing the history between them
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Gill_dil

Hey..so I dont know if you will see this or if you do you will go ahead with it but..let's give it a shot...
          
          I just published the second and the last part of a two shot I wrote...It is around Ishman...(Ishan and Shubman) i dont know if you read their stories..but if you do..please do give it a shot..
          
          You can easily find the book on my profile...or if you need reply for the link..
          
          Thank you!!
          
          Ps. I LOVE YOUR BOOKS A LOTTTTT

Gill_dil

@dreamerlass Its okay...I mean I had kinda concluded that...seeing you usually write stories with Mahi bhai and seniors...but its good to know you are willing to try..
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dreamerlass

@Gill_dil I generally don't read Ishman stories but I could try it at some point
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