Saumya

Hey guys
          
          So I've started reposting 'Mere Pyaare Bhaiya' now
          
          I know that some of you might've already read it when I first uploaded it here, but due to some problems, I'm making some changes now
          
          So, I'm gonna request you all to check out the changes and let me know if you're happy with these possible changes, or if you guys have any other suggestions and I'll see if I can do something about it
          
          Here's the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/370354905-mere-pyaare-bhaiya

@dreamerlass no your are not answering because my points are valid and you have no answer otherwise you had replied like you are replying my other comments 

@Shaggggggg she Cleary named book mere bhaiya even description story is about a boy who raised his brother but forgot to live for his happiness but in book in just 3-4 chapters virat became men he live separately not having much moments with mahi all chapters about mahis love story if he forgot to live for his happiness then how he fell in love when chekeu was small how he made his own family and where is brotherhood in story after 3-4 chapters. 

@Shaggggggg so if that would be case she shouldn't have labeled as brotherhood story, shouldn't wrote misleading description how a brother will fake care of a toddler 

@dreamerlass problem was already explained in comment section of that book you claim it to be a brotherhood story after 3-4  chapters it was all about mahis binding with Dada ict, his love story and then his daughter and problem he faced, you claim the story was about how a younger child live with his brother but in 3-4 chapters that child became a grown men live away from his brother and there is hardly and brother moments 

Have you guys seen the 'but you're not nerdy enough to understand it' memes?
          
          Which ones are your absolute favourites in those? (Also give a small clue in brackets just in case I also can't understand the reference)

If people have an issue with someone's work here then why continue reading it?
          
          Also do people not understand the concept of constructive criticism anymore?

@_rsm07 it's happening from months many authors books deleted has been deleted for no reason 

Just need to rant a little so just ignore if you've got issues with it
          
          Since when is trying to portray an idealistic relationship a crime people?
          Also what does that have to do with one's age?

Hey author sorry to post here without your permission 
          Readers please give my book a chance 
          Do vote, support, comment and enjoy ❤️ 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401244395?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=the_tales_weaver