dreamqueen26

velvet_wishpers

Hey!! Sorry for invading your personal space. Saw your comment under a cricket book. Wrote one myself. Would really appreciate you giving your precious time. If you like please give it a shot. Your perspective really matters!!
          
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/411190140?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=velvet_wishpers

velvet_wishpers

@velvet_wishpers thanks for your opinion. It really matters a lot to me. And no it was not mean. I've been dying to know a genuine perspective. I'll keep this in mind. And not disappoint you in future. Season 2 of this book is gonna be a lot better.
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dreamqueen26

@velvet_wishpers I read your story it was good but it lacked reality. I know this is a fictional story the plot is completely your wish but if it connects with reality then it goes deep in the readers heart. This is just my opinion. Then your way of explaining love is awesome   good plot also. Sorry if I sounded mean it's just my opinion 
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