dreamsdocometrue44

@NYC8794 My pleasure(;

mariaswritesxx

Hey it's me again, please read my comments from the bottom to the top. Also my comments are only suggestions and tips that you absolutely do not have to follow. It's just to help you get some ideas and keep going because I love your book "Don't leave me".

mariaswritesxx

By the way when Chase goes to the cops and starts working with Audrey's dad, to stop Matt and Addilyn, (thought Audrey does not know that and there will be some drama about that but they will work through it because she'll understand that everything that Chase's does he does for her) he "grows closer" to her biological dad and learns that her real father never gave up on her, she was taken way by her mother. When Audrey gets this information she, her babies and Sage gets thrown out of her mothers house. Chase told them that they could stay at his place but that would not have worked out well since Molly lives there as well. Audrey, her kids and Sage moves in with her biological father, his wife and their son and dog. 

mariaswritesxx

Oh and Addilyn may lose her and Matt's baby due to stress and alcohol or just because of some healt problems. Audrey may also lose Kimmy as a friend when Kimmy finds out that Audrey has feelings for Chase since Kimmy does to. Although they may get back as friends in the end when Kimmy realize that what she had whit Chase was pure pleasure but she may also team up with Addilyn. Molly will get together with Nate who is only using her for pleasure. Audrey understands that because she knows what kind of a guy Nate is, but when she tells Molly, Molly does not take it well. Molly may (or will) think that Audrey just want to break them apart just because Audrey and Matt broke up and does not want anyone else to be happy. So just as Kimmy, Molly and Audrey loses contact (at least for a while). Everyone knows that Nate is using Molly, the same way as he is using lots of other girls, but Molly does not believe anyone and thinks that it's just a rumor that Audrey spread to tear her and Nate apart. But Molly does not team up with Addilyn since Addilyn has tried to hook up with Nate as well. Sage is the only one that stays by Audrey's side. So when Sage starts taking drugs and gets thrown out by her parents, Audrey helps her out. When ever Audrey feels like giving up Sage is there and when Audrey falls for Chase, Sage is there by her side. (In the end Audrey, Sage and Molly may get together as besties again but the relationship between them and Kimmy will never be the same again). 

mariaswritesxx

It would be an interesting turn of events if Matt's dad died while being deployed. Matt will get very cold and mean towards Audrey. In the heat of the moment he'll slap Audrey and really break her heart. Meanwhile Chase will change his attitude. When he sees how Matt treats Audrey he will be the only one there for her during the rest of her pregnancy. He will be protective over her and very loving but he won't be as jealous as Matt usually are. He'll trust Audrey and with time they will grow closer. They'll become best of friends and as Audrey start to fall for him really hard he'll confess that he is in love with Kimmy. (In reality he is not IN live with Audrey anymore, he LOVES her and the babies but he is afraid of commitment and does not know that Audrey is in love with him). As this happens Matt comes back into Audrey's life and try's to get back together with her. But Chase catches Matt in bed with Addilyn and takes a photo to prove it to Audrey. When Audrey sees the photo she confesses her feelings to Chase. But since Chase is afraid of commitment he runs tells her that the does not feel the same way. Whit time Audrey learns that Chase's mother left him when he was 13 and has been very broken seens then. That only makes Audrey fall even more in love with Chase. But Matt (who got Addilyn PREGNANT but keeps it a secret) still wants Audrey's love. He becomes very aggressive and harmful. He blackmails Audrey and she has to start dating him again, and if not...Matt will hurt her family and Chase. Chase finds out about his by accident when he sees Audrey's phone. So he goes to the police but the cop he meets is no other than who? Audrey's biological father! Who tried to get back into Audrey's life but was kicked out. What happens next??? 

PandaHeart116

@StoryLoverMariaS audrey already goes through so much why put her strough more 
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