Hi, I know I shouldn’t be saying this, and I’m not hating on your story or your writing style—I genuinely think your story is worth reading. It has so much potential, but it feels like it’s missing a few things. That’s why I have a humble request—could you try using ChatGPT to refine your chapters? Just give it your written chapters, let it enhance them, and then upload those refined versions here. I bet it’ll make the story even better and more engaging! Plus, it might help make the chapters longer too. Please consider revising the previous chapters this way—it would be amazing to read!