driftshaded

I FORGOT THIS ACCOUNT EXISTED, WOAH. ANYWAYS. I STILL WRITE BUT I HAVEN’T TOUCHED WARRIORS IN YEARS

saltxe

Hi! can you review my OC?
          
          Name:  Lava in the mountain (Lava-fluff )
          
          Gender: Tom
          
          Clan: Tribe of hearths (adopted culture of the tribe of the rushing water)
          The tribe is in an underground mine.
          
          Rank: Hearth holder (similar to a clan leader, protects a precious stone)
          
          Looks: fluffy cinnamon tabby with orange stripes. Hazel eyes.
          
          Personality:  An arrogant tom with a need to always do something quickly, that's why his flaw is rushing things and not doing it well enough.
          
          Backstory: He lived in thunderclan with his grandparents until he was an apprentice. His parents had run away to the tribe because they broke the warrior code. Lava decided to move there and choose a different path because a prophecy line had supposedly mentioned him. "The lava will flow through and through but will block when in the clan for too long..." meaning that his life will end shortly if he stayed in thunderclan for too long. He didn't want to endanger anyone so he went with his parents.
          
          Mates info: The sparkling gem (Gem). Gem is a well-known cat because her great grandfather had founded this clan. She had a rare case of albinism and because her eyes were a rare pink just like the gems in the mine she was named Gem. She had to retire after having kits because it affected her a lot. 
          
          Family info: 
          Father: The river where trout swim  (river) A grey tabby with blue eyes.
          Mother: The moon in the night sky (Moon) an albino cat with blue eyes.
          Grandparents: Marigoldpelt (Golden she-cat) and Flyingbird (Black tom)

ink_shadow8142

I have an oc I'd like you to review please! 
          
          Name: cherryblossom
          Clan: nightclan
          Gender: female
          Rank: medicine cat
          
          Looks: black cat with a white and stripe down her back. Her left paw is a fox-red color and so is her ear tips along with a flower-type pattern on her flank. 
          
          Personality: funny, cheerful, forgiving and a rule follower
          
          Backstory: she was abandoned as a kit along with her brother (foxtail) and was forced to survive. When she was 8 moons old, she was found and taken into nightclan. Her brother however, did not like the way the clan was organized. Despitehis love for his sister, he still  refused to join her and eventually formed his own clan (frostclan) made up of rouges and loners. Cherryblossom  always had a love for herbs and plants. Soon anfter joining she had become the medic's apprentice.
            
          (No mate) 
          (Parents: dead
          Brother: foxtail (info above))
          
          Whatcha think? 
          Let me know!