Juipem
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Hi driugh
I spent some time reading Collide and I did not want to just move on without saying something. There is a certain feeling in your story that is hard to explain but easy to feel. The part where you describe him as “a force that consumes everything in its path” really stood out to me. It gives the relationship a weight that feels intense and almost dangerous in a very real way.
I also noticed how you balance his harshness with that pull he still has toward her. That mix of distance and obsession is not easy to write but you handled it in a way that feels natural. It made me slow down and actually sit with the emotions instead of just reading through.
While reading I kept thinking this is the kind of story that should be getting more attention than it is right now. The writing is there. The feeling is there. It just feels like it has not been fully seen yet.
I am reaching out simply because I appreciated what you created and wanted you to know it reached someone.
Can I ask, have you published any of your work on Amazon or Goodreads