driyonce

Is there a sequel to ultimate play?? Good book but, would love to see where the sequel will end!!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/333931119?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Zeynep3513&wp_originator=T6mOyRhWixD%2FpqVwWJivuVpYD8QJZr9PcBx7o%2FvKfXDGuBrB9A1ibaWdiApNKI083%2FARQzYE2khPEhM24nutjJydJ1FpBM5TgVXZfYGkwpGfdcXMtuuAfRK2AmMce7aZ

I can't read chap. 8 and im following you. I deleted the book & added it back. What do I have to do to get chapter 8 & others that are blocked?

So what if I said I was working on a new story? Is anybody still supporting me? Lmaooooo

I can't see chapter 8 and13 on the book Typical
          

I can’t see certain chapters even though I follow you

It won't gave me the 8 chapter wattpad be tripping. 

I think your story is good,  it I do strongly agree with you, it needs revising. You're a good writer because you have me stressed out about Danny and Chance. I get the focus of Danny's issue, she doesn't speak up. I guess the abuse may stay I the story. I just hate that she had to suffer like that. I have some ideas that I think may be good revisions.
          
          Rodrick character: he begins to feel guilty like you originally wrote, especially when she let it slip of the abuse at home. But he should break up because of the lies from Tiffany. 
          To be honest, I was weirded out when his character mentioned having sex with her step-brothers and he wasnt grossed out by that or concerned. There are some parts in the story that are so cute and o. It, but then you should go into more of Tiffany fake friendship earlier. Just some inputs. If my ideas suck, or not your thing, it's okay, I'll still wait for your rewrite. I like the focus she damaged and so is her white knight in shining armor. 

Thanks for voting and reading and adding my story I hope you enjoy it!
          
          - Shin ♡ 

OVOE at 4K without a single update in months , Kmsl.