driz_zzy

Can any of you see the last chapter I posted? 

JROpc88

Yes! I cant believe see chapter 26
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driz_zzy

@JROpc88 can you see chapter 26?
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JROpc88

Nope — not seeing anything.
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JROpc88

Another phenomenal update. I am so heartbroken thinking about how lost and scared and alone and angry and sad Mari must have been before it all became too much to bear. 
          
          What I love about your story is that you don’t pretty up what Brian did. You don’t romanticize it or excuse it or soften it. You keep it 100% real. He said and did horrible things—things he can never take back and he has to live with that and the consequences and the guilt forever. That is his reality now. Knowing that he failed someone he loved and who loved him and wanted to stay. Now she is gone and he has to stay in the wreckage. 

driz_zzy

@JROpc88 Thank you so mich, my apologies for the late reply I have been busy and trying to finish the story at the same time
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driz_zzy

Can any of you see the last chapter I posted? 

JROpc88

Yes! I cant believe see chapter 26
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driz_zzy

@JROpc88 can you see chapter 26?
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JROpc88

Nope — not seeing anything.
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driz_zzy

Due to some network issue I won't he able to post "AFTER MARI" for now. 
          Please be patient. 

JROpc88

Thank you for the update! I love this story so much and am looking forward to the next chapter and to see how it all ends. 
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driz_zzy

@JROpc88 Hopefully i will start posting on Monday i hate typing with phone and prefer using Laptop,
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JROpc88

Oh no!! I hope the tech issues get resolved soon. I am so invested in this story!
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JROpc88

I am absolutely loving After Mari. I feel so on edge imagining what happened to her when she went home to her awful father and am so heartbroken thinking about how desperate and devastated Mari must have felt her final few weeks in the US. 
          
          If the outcome of the story is as bad as my worst-case-scenario brain has led me to believe, I don’t know how anyone could live with that kind of guilt. Knowing you had the power to do something and did nothing instead. 
          
          May I ask how many chapters we have left? I look forward to your updates and so appreciate your writing. 

driz_zzy

@JROpc88  Hello, thank you for reading this story, probably 8 chapters to go, but it will soon end.
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