drpepper226

@svaleria none of my books only have one page bby.... just sayinn

Lucylu312

Thx u!! And yeah I kinda noticed that too....the thing was that I was on vacation when I uploaded those chapters, so I didn't write them as I usually write my stories(aka longer and better) so I had to rush things a little to get my chapters out. The upcoming chapters are gonna be longer and a bit more well written since I have a little extra time, and I haven't uploaded in a bit because I'm working so hard on them! Thank you so much for ur advice, I like the idea of elaborating it...lol and I guess haymitch just kinda walked in when Peeta did!

drpepper226

@Lucylu312 Hi! I read your book and it's very good! I like where it's going, but it's a little confusing. Don't be afraid to elaborate little things... I know that's one of my biggest mistakes. And longer chapters are a good thing too! The one thing I did just have a question for the story is in the first chapter, how did Haymitch just like appear in their bedroom???????? I really like the book and think you should keep going and write more!
          If you need any other help, I'd be happy too help! :)