Monkery737

I really love "One more time"!  I'm glad that it is still ongoing, but I feel that if you wanted to, you could even expand more of the chapters you've already written.  Looking forward to reading more!

drshayk

@Monkery737 sure I'd be happy to have your inputs and spell check kindly DM me regarding it. :)
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Monkery737

I would love to give my input.  If any comments bother you, just ask me to clarify or ignore them!  :)  Do you want me to point out spelling mistakes,as well?  I don't know how much you want to re-edit it.  Have a great week!
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drshayk

@Monkery737 thank you so much for loving one more time, your words and input mean alot to me, regarding the expansion let me know which parts do you think are more juicy, I'd surely expand if I come up with better sub plots. Till then thank you so much again. Enjoy reading 
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