eldelaferrere
Hey, why does Grimoires and Gunsmoke skip from chapter 3 to 32? Was it deleted or is this your mistake?
Does this affect anything, or can I continue reading?
eldelaferrere
@duddlered Did you happen to post it anywhere else? And what does Amazon have to do with it?
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duddlered
@eldelaferrere it's because Amazon ill sue me into the next universe since I published on their platform
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gunman567
Big question. Wtf happened to he ohio incident arc? Why gone?
duddlered
@gunman567 Amazon forces me to delete it when I publish or they Nuke me from orbit
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IAMThePortal
Great story you’ve written, just 2 questions
1. What exactly happened to chp 1-31?
2. The Imperials mentioned that they have POWs and captured equipment once then was never brought up again. Do you plan to do anything with those?
duddlered
@IAMThePortal Amazon requires I take them whenever I release them officially through their service
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DarRielWillfruz
Hi there, you're story is impressive. With how much perspective and effort on the characters, the mc you put on the whole story is really good and have read it couple of times already. But i have a question regarding to the US Army currently doing on this uncharted world? Have they still on a skirmish with the Vyrraasha's forces or have already established an FOB? They been out of touch for the past chapters and how the locals still doesn't know much on anything happening in their front.
DarRielWillfruz
Alright thats good to hear. I will look forward to the upcoming chapters, keep on the good work:)
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Lesonion
Your work is boring and doesn't make any progress. Go read the reviews on Royal road, they describe your work wonderfully.
luiguix12
Exelente
KevinKocher
Nice to see your work here as well.
gunman567
Hey there i gotta say this is a piece of pure art it isnt some generic story of modern tech curbstomping magic this seems more balanced modern tech still has a better edge it seems like but more balanced and you can see the struggles on each side no one is having a good time the story telling is just awesome you can feel the difficulty of the soldiers fighting to stay alive all i can say is this is a masterpiece