DarRielWillfruz

Hi there, you're story is impressive. With how much perspective and effort on the characters, the mc you put on the whole story is really good and have read it couple of times already. But i have a question regarding to the US Army currently doing on this uncharted world? Have they still  on a skirmish with the Vyrraasha's forces or have already established an FOB? They been out of touch for the past chapters and how the locals still doesn't know much on anything happening in their front. 

DarRielWillfruz

Alright thats good to hear. I will look forward to the upcoming chapters, keep on the good work:) 
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duddlered

@DarRielWillfruz that will be covered in later chapters 
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gunman567

 Hey there i gotta say this is a piece of pure art it isnt some generic story of modern tech curbstomping magic this seems more balanced modern tech still has a better edge it seems like but more balanced and you can see the struggles on each side no one is having a good time the story telling is just awesome you can feel the difficulty of the soldiers fighting to stay alive all i can say is this is a masterpiece

duddlered

@MelanieBoston :D thank you for the follow! I appreciate you
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gunman567

 ps im also your first follower
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