Dem_Shshi

@dumbunny16 මං ඒ කොටස් වෙනස් කරන්නම් අක්කේ. තව දේවල් තියෙනවනම් කියන්න . මං කතා ලියන්න අලුත් කෙනෙක් නිසා වැරදි හදාගන්න ඕනේ. ප්‍රශ්නයක් නැහැ අක්කේ මගෙ වැරදි මට හදාගන්න ඕනේ ඒ නිසා කියන්න. ❤️❤️

Dem_Shshi

Thanks for voting my story dear ❤️ 

dumbunny16

@Dem_Shshi That's all 
            I'm glad that things worked out:)
            Good luck on your future writing✨️
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dumbunny16

@Dem_Shshi  Your welcome.It was a nice story. Thankyou for writing it . So im also a writer so is it okay if i tell u some things that you can change in your writing style? Im pretty sure that you unintentionally wrote it just to make your story good but sometimes what you write in a book  reflects the authors feelings so people might misundestand. What i saw in you book was that ur main character spewing a lot of transphobic comments and it might be offensive to some people i know that ur not transphobic but it would be better if u add a tag in ur warning that there's tranphobic speech in the book cause some paople might get triggerd by it. So i'm sorry if i offend u but ur writing was good and i enjoyed it a lot and i would be glad if you change ur perspective about trans people. Thank you:)
            
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