mynameishihihihi

Hi there 
          I would love i mean LOVE if you would check on my story. https://my.w.tt/lY8TpfqGe
          I am a new writer and I was hoping you could give me some advice to improve my writing skills. Thank you so much and I hope you have a WONDERFUL day☺️ 
          
          Don’t forget to comment your advice and maybe vote but ... you don’t have to but I would love if you did that. Well stay home safe!