@dustybun009
Dude. In ur story-1st correct the summary. Like few extra words r present
2nd i. Da starting of 1st chap. Itd written "wait colin" i guess nd its said by his mum. But later u shift the dialogue to the father. Like i don't think its supposed to be like tht. I guess u made a mistake with mom nd dad
New acc? ND U NEVER TOLD ME ABT IT! I HURT
Hey sam!! Awesome!!loved it a lot.waiting for d next chapter!!!
Sam....its AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!! Waiting for the nxt chapter........luved it.....
Sameera....good start for a book but you need to check your errors.....like Natalie cannot RELEASE the dream.....she can REALISE that it was a dream....and the ending was amazing.....Count me as a fan of your book!
