hi everyone !! i know i've been gone for a while, so so sorry for no updates, but im now in the process of re writing 'carnage' to fix any plot holes, consistency issues, grammar etc. ill keep the story and character the same just changing a few of the bits that don't make sense and fixing up the character abit. im re writing it so when i've finished a few more chapters i'll publish it as a seperate book and continue updating it as i go. thank you so much for all the feedback and if you have any other feedback to improve the story while im re writing it please reply. thank you !!!