its_yaya13

Your new book is good! However try to make chapters longer if you're going for a short story, you definitely have to make it longer to hit your goal, short stories are in between 15-20. Keep writing your book! I'm interested so far!❤️

its_yaya13

@dysfunstionalsoul 15-20 chapters, sorry for not being precise, I'm not sure if your book is a one shot or a full book, but if it's a full book it's very good! The chapters have to be longer for more time to develop the story ! If it's a one shot I would recommend doing a full book. You're welcome for the tips! If you need any more just mention me on your page! I'll be happy to help
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dysfunstionalsoul

@its_yaya13 15-20 chapters or paragraphs? and thank you for the tips, i gladly appreciate them!
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dysfunstionalsoul

what is dave east even famous for?

dysfunstionalsoul

@lunarswrld shid idk that’s why im asking 
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lunarswrld

@dysfunstionalsoul isn’t he a rapper or sum ?
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dysfunstionalsoul

turn vixen ta a book???? 

iheartalllabels

@dysfunstionalsoul yup mhm imma be ya biggest fan when it comes to these books
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dysfunstionalsoul

semaj would have a different fc though cs that was js a random girl in my phone cs her dress was cute
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dysfunstionalsoul

got my heart broke a couple days ago, hadda start back writing lolll. i hope yall enjoy my new book. give me feedback, thanks.

lunarswrld

i hope you get well soon <3
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