dystopianjunkie14

Hey guys, if anyone knows any writers on this platform that can help give feedback stories related to fantasy, dystopia, and action?  if so, please tag them in the comments?

Alright Guys, This is the original version.  I repeat, this is the VERY FIRST VERSION of the description. I was supposed to update this a while ago, but I kept having writer's block and I just wanted to see  if this version is good enough or not. We all know what happened with the war of independence. Well, this version of it has a very tiny twist in it...
          
          What if the U.S didn't win the war of independence?
          
          What if the continent of Europe continued to have control over the United States?
          
          After the long, hard, war of Great Britain vs the U.S., it was finally over. For the Americans, it was a great defeat in battle and an even greater one for the fight of independence. For the U.k, not only was it a victory but also a chance to make America pay for the damage that was caused during and after the war. With the population of great Britain barely stable, great Britain's ruler has issued that as punishment to the defeated colony, every year on the 4th day of the seventh month (4th of July) to the 10th day of the seventh month (July 10th) the men of Britain shall go to American in search for a wife. This event was called "The Annual".

Hey, In cases you guys didn't get the announcement earlier, I am making a short story for my first attempt at a real, Original story/book. I will post the description and would really appreciate it if you guys can give me some constructive feedback on it. More on the short story AND book/ Full story itself in due time. Thank you all.

Hey, so I'm making a book called "the annual" and it's a dystopian romance/historical fiction/action. Here's the summary:
          
          what if the U.S didn't win the war of independence?
          what if the continent of Europe continued to have control over the United States?
          
          After the long, hard, war of Great Britain vs u.s, it was finally over. For the Americans, it was a great defeat in battle and an even greater one for the fight of independence. For the U.k, not only was it a victory but also a chance to make America pay for the damage that was caused during and after the war. With the population of great Britain barely stable,great Britain's ruler has issued that as punishment to the defeated colony, every year on the 4th day of the sixth month (4th of July) to the 10th day of the sixth month (July 10th) the men of Britain shall go to American in search for a wife. This event was called "the annual". 
          
          So if anyone would like to help me with it a little or know anyone that can help, just share the story to them and link the profile so they can contact me. Please and thank you.
          
          Ps: this is my first attempt at a real book, so please be serious about this.