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// YOUR ACC IS SO PRETTY WAAH <3

ofc love, i’ll check it out x 

@floralreign ur sweeter omg! thank you for the follow back ily

@floralreign ofc! anytime <3

@Bellareeves22 you too!

@Bellareeves22 *indent

@Bellareeves22 ok, I read the first two parts and this is what I think so far: maybe work on your consistency a little bit, sometimes you use capital I's and sometimes lowercase i's. also, in dialogue you also want to add " " at the beginning and end of the sentence, not ' '. also, add a paragraph and intent. overall, it's a good plot and it's very amusing! this is just some constructive criticism, no hate at all :))

@Bellareeves22 i'll get to it as soon as i can!

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